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Post by Scooterly on Jun 23, 2007 12:16:21 GMT -5
AH! You can't stop there! I really REALLY need more now . . .
No pressure . . . *big eyes*
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Post by megatude on Jun 23, 2007 23:52:56 GMT -5
On the edge!
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Post by Jennifer on Jun 24, 2007 12:54:25 GMT -5
Excellent idea writing from the perspective of Pegasus. I've never read a story like this one!
Great work!
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Post by Peggy on Jun 27, 2007 3:44:56 GMT -5
Thanks. Glad you all like it. Since I'm not totally sure where I want them to go now I wrote this little chapter just because. Not the best chapter. At least I don't think so.
Chapter 6
We stayed in the candle lit room for a while. Wolf eventually fell asleep and I thought I would look around. So I headed up the stairs and....wait one second......Well Wolf wants his turn to part of the story. So here you go....
Hi! It's Wolf. Now what Pegasus just told you is very out of well....me. I don't usually jump in front of arrows to save someone. Actually I wouldn't do a lot of things to help someone. If I ever had someone who wanted my help. I would just hide any way. I guess I could explain why a little better. My past a little bit. I was born in a rather dark woods. I had three sisters, I was the only boy. Our mother, a white wolf, loved us so much she would protect us with her life. Which is exactly what she did. When me and my sisters were eight weeks old our mother took us out to find food. While she was trying to catch a deer I could smell. I followed my nose and my sisters followed me. I led us the a half eaten deer that I thought we could eat. So we dug in. We didn't know that it belonged to someone else, until it was too late. As we were eating a huge black wolf with red eyes attacked us. We all tried to run back to where mother was but the wolf was faster and grabbed one of my sisters. He then tried to get me but mother jumped and attacked him. The black wolf was much bigger then our mom. Much bigger. I tried to protect her but I was thrown into a bush by the wolf's paw. I stayed there for a little and then poked my head out just as he grabbed my two other sisters in his mouth and run off. My mother looked worse then the eaten up deer. I wasn't able to look at her and ran off back to our cave, crying. After two days of laying in the same spot without moving hunger got to me and I decided I should find a new home. I found my father but he didn't want me. He just chased me off. Nobody really wanted me. A couple of female wolves tolerated me but after a while they either told me that they didn't have enough room for me or they "accidentally" left me when we went to find food. So I lived alone, taking care of myself. I soon became easily scared and tended to be a little anti-social. At one point I was part of a pack but I always messed things up and they eventually kicked me out. I lived on my own for four years of my life. Then the one day I was out for a drink when I found the little pool. I tried to drink out of it but it sucked me in and took me to where I met Pegasus. Why I jumped in front of an arrow? No one ever wanted me around. And Pegasus was nice to me and tolerated me. He was basically my friend and I couldn't just let him die right in front of me. Without out thinking I jumped between him and the arrow and next thing I knew I was laying on the floor with an arrow in my shoulder. After I woke up Pegasus had found a piece of cloth and we both tried to wrap it around my still bleeding wound. Not the best job but it was on. After that....well I guess I should let Pegasus finish. Considering this is his story, not mine.
And now you know the history of Wolf. Kind of depressing. And now back to my search for Hercules and Meg.
End of chapter 6
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Post by I love Snow White on Jun 27, 2007 5:14:05 GMT -5
I love it pretty much. Write more.
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Post by Scooterly on Jun 27, 2007 8:07:49 GMT -5
Awe, poor Wolf! Its nice to know more about him though, really loving it! Can't wait for more!
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Post by megatude on Jun 27, 2007 18:57:24 GMT -5
That's an awesome chapter! Way to go!
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Post by Arabella on Jun 28, 2007 14:43:50 GMT -5
I liked that chapter very much! Can't wait to read more!
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Post by Peggy on Jul 3, 2007 1:55:47 GMT -5
This actually took me all weekend to write! And it's not even the whole chapter! My brain's not working right.
Chapter 7
After Wolf and I made many attempts to get the cloth around his arm we manged. He was able to stand up and take a leap into the pool, which dropped us into more sand. First I thought we were in another desert but instead we were at a beach. Obviously Wolf had never seen an ocean before. He stood there and stared out at the endless stretch of water. I headed off down the shore and Wolf limped behind me, splashing through the waves.Half way down I could hear someone's voice coming from behind a rock that was further out in the water. We flew out and landed on the other side of the tiny rock island. On the other side was a girl with red hair and a little yellow fish. The fish saw us and screamed. "Ahhh!! Swim!" They both splashed away. Wolf and I exchanged confused looks and climbed over to the other side. The girl then popped her head back up and stared at us. "Ariel! What are you doing? They might be dangerous!" the little fish yelled. "It's alright Flounder. I read about these in one of my books. It's a....umm...a horse!" Ariel said. She reached her hand out to pet my nose. "But I've never heard of any with wings." Wolf was more interested with Flounder. He had never seen a fish either. "Do you think you can understand him?" she asked Flounder. ""I don't know but I guess I could try." So I told him who I was. "I think he said his name was Pegasus? And that's Wolf." Flounder could understand what I was saying so I explained the whole story again. He then told Ariel and asked if she knew how to help us. "Well, since I can't walk on land I'm not much help. But what I can tell you is that the mountain of rocks over there, if you go to the top you can see everything around the beach. If you don't see what you're looking for come back." Ariel told us. I told Flounder to thank her for me and Wolf and I flew up to the very tall mountain.
to be continued..........
That's all I have right now.
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Post by Scooterly on Jul 3, 2007 8:39:19 GMT -5
Ah writer's block . . . one of many joys of writing! However, it seems you did an excellant job nonetheless! Can't wait for the rest of the chapter! This just keeps gettin' better.
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Post by megatude on Jul 3, 2007 15:46:50 GMT -5
More characters adds excitement to the story. Terrific!
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Post by Arabella on Jul 5, 2007 12:06:48 GMT -5
Awesome, as always!
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Post by NPTFlea on Jul 18, 2007 16:04:58 GMT -5
I really like this story. I love how they're visiting all of the Differeant Disney Worlds.
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Post by megatude on Jul 18, 2007 19:00:55 GMT -5
Kinda like Kingdom Hearts.
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Post by I love Snow White on Jul 19, 2007 5:17:34 GMT -5
Yeah.It's such a great story. Please continue!
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