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Post by Peggy on May 28, 2007 0:14:58 GMT -5
I got bored so I decided to post more tonight. This isn't the end of chapter 2. It's kind of a long chapter but this part just explains my character and how he met Pegasus.
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I could see a shadow coming towards me. Ready to defend myself I waited for whatever it was to come out. I was expecting some evil creature thing but instead a dog poked his head out of the bushes. His fur was gray and sort of matted. He looked scared. I asked him what his name was and how he got here. He told me his name was Wolf and that he wasn't sure how he got here. He said that the other day he found a little pond and started drinking from it, but when it did it sucked him up into it and he woke up here. I now knew how he got here but still had no idea where he came from in the first place. The wind blew some branches and Wolf leaped into the air and hide behind me, shaking. He was obviously scared and I couldn't just leave him or ignore him, so I asked him if he wanted to stay with me. It didn't take long for him to answer. I laid back down under the tree and he asked me where I came from and who was I. I told him the story. The entire story. Shortened a little.After that he curled up under the tree nest to mine. But he didn't stay there. The whole night, every little noise he heard he would jump up and hide. Of course he hide behind me every time which woke me up. Not the best nights sleep I've ever had. Finally I was able to get some sleep. When I woke up I was very hungry and thirsty. Wolf told me that he knew where to get food and water. Sadly the only food he had was a deer and I don't eat meat. So I stuck with water and some grass. Not as good as bird seed but it would have to do. Wolf and I then went back to the place where we slept and waited for Pocahontas to come get me.
to be continued again....
Wolf was because I didn't want poor Pegasus to be all alone on his adventure. Thought he deserved to have a friend to help him. And he's one of those characters who never actually got a name so he is named for what he is.
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Post by megatude on May 28, 2007 17:06:14 GMT -5
Pegasus, indeed, needed a travel companion.
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Post by NPTFlea on May 30, 2007 21:53:50 GMT -5
Amazing. Dang...I can't come on very often for a while, and suddenly we're flooded with amaing work! Mind if I put this on Herc-Haven??? It's sooo great!
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Post by Scooterly on May 30, 2007 22:28:43 GMT -5
Ah, cool story! I've never thought of it from Pegasus point of view before . . . and then you throw in other Disney movies as well; great twist! And wolves are my favorite; it just doesn't get any better! I hope to see more soon; can't wait!
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Post by Peggy on May 30, 2007 23:55:39 GMT -5
I'm glad you guys like it. And go head Nat. You can put it on Herc-Haven. And I'll get more up tomorrow.
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Post by Peggy on May 31, 2007 2:14:08 GMT -5
I just remembered that I won't be here tomorrow so here is the rest of chapter 2 now.
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Me and Wolf waited and waited...and waited. But Pocahontas never came. I was starting to get worried. After what seemed like ages I got up to look for her. Wolf leaped up and ran after me. We went back to the village and found...well, you don't want to know what we found. The entire village, that I was just at the day before, was burnt to the ground. The corn field was gone and the houses were either completely gone or only had parts of the walls left. I looked at Wolf who looked just as shocked as I was. We walked through the ashes. I was afraid something had happened to them. Where was Pocahontas and more importantly, was she okay? Wolf had been close behind me but when I turned around he wasn't there. He was off where the burnt houses were, sniffing around. He just ran around in circles sniffing the ground. I went the other way looking through the ash. Then Wolf howled, startling me. He told me to follow him before he ran off into the other part of the woods. I followed him as closely as I could. It was much harder for a horse to run through a woods then it was a wolf. He stopped and started sniffing around again. Then he dashed off again. I ran after him. When I first met Wolf he was scared of everything, but now he seemed determined to find something, which probably meant something was wrong. He kept running but then he stopped. So suddenly that I almost ran into him. I looked and saw what he was starring at. 'Oh no.' There was a girl with long black hair laying near a tree. Her cloths were burnt, and she was too.
End of chapter 2
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Post by NPTFlea on May 31, 2007 11:29:58 GMT -5
GREAT! Thank you so much. This really is a FANTASTIC story.
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Post by Arabella on Jun 3, 2007 2:10:19 GMT -5
OOH! I can't wait to read the next part! I love this story! It's great!!!!
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Post by Peggy on Jun 3, 2007 4:06:18 GMT -5
Okay. Originally I was going to have a new chapter per world or place or whatever the heck you want to call it. But that would make each of the chapters really really long. So I split it up a little.
Chapter 3
She wasn't moving. I wasn't sure if she was died or alive, but I prayed she was alive. I nudged her a little to try and wake her up. She opened her eyes and looked up at me. "What are you doing here?" Pocahontas asked, but it didn't sound like she was full there. She tried to stand up but fell right back done. Luckily I was caught her and pushed her up on my back. I had to get her some water or something. I asked Wolf if he had ever sniffed out water. He said that he hadn't but that he could give it a shot. He sniffed around and I followed and made sure Pocahontas didn't fall off. He eventually led us to a small river. I laid Pocahontas by the river edge a splashed some water on her. Me and Wolf both stared down at her waiting for her to wake up again. "Where am I?" she asked, sitting up and rubbing her head. "How did I get here? The last thing I remember was the village caught on fire. With all the commotion I got lost then passed out from all the smoke. I think?" She stood up and walked around a little bit. "Dad? Where's my dad?!" She suddenly became very frantic. "What if he's hurt...what if he's lost...what if he's...oh no." She looked at us. "Can you two help me find him?" she asked. We both agreed to help. "Thank you!" she said before climbing on my back. She helped Wolf on and I flew into the air. Pocahontas didn't seem scared when I started flying. Either she was too worried about her dad or it didn't bother her. Wolf on the other hand was freaked out. I could start to feel his claws digging in. We landed back in the village, which was pretty far from the river we were just at. More walking then I thought. Pocahontas leaped off and started looking. "Dad! Dad where are you?!" she called, digging through the ashes. I looked behind me. Wolf had his eyes tightly shut and was clinging to me. He slowly opened one eye and once he was sure we were on the ground he opened to other a slid off.I watched Pocahontas run back and forth calling for her dad. I felt bad and I didn't know why. Then I remembered that if Wolf could sniff out Pocahontas and the water maybe he could find her father too. He was still shaken from the ride but said he would do it. Once Wolf picked up something I got Pocahontas to follow us. We ran through the woods. Wolf leading us, then Pocahontas, and me in the back. We had absolutely no idea if the scent Wolf was following was even her father's, but we had to try.
to be continued.....
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Post by Scooterly on Jun 3, 2007 19:14:22 GMT -5
Ah! You're doing so great, I can't wait for more! ;D I can't wait to see where they go next to!
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Post by megatude on Jun 3, 2007 22:47:24 GMT -5
Loving it.
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Post by Arabella on Jun 4, 2007 14:37:22 GMT -5
Can't wait for more! ^^
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Post by Peggy on Jun 6, 2007 18:29:46 GMT -5
Glad you all like it. Okay. Here is the rest of chapter 3.
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It was easy to tell that Wolf was becoming tired. I really didn't want to push him, but he was one who didn't say no to someone. Even if he didn't want to. After running in circles we ended up in the same treeless area where I met Wolf. It never seemed to end. Wolf clasped on the ground, panting like crazy. I felt really bad now. If I hadn't asked him to help he wouldn't be so tired. Pocahontas bent down and stroked Wolf's head. "I really don't want to but I think we should take a break." she said. She got up and sat underneath a tree. I laid down under a different on and dozed off for a little. I wasn't asleep for long before I was woken up by Wolf shaking me. He said that he could hear someone. I listened carefully and heard a faint growling. I got Pocahontas and we both ran in the direction of the sound. Wolf didn't follow at first but was to scared to be alone so he ran after us. There was a man laying against a tree trying to keep a very large cat away from him. "Father!" Pocahontas yelled and ran to him. The big cat was about to pounce on them when he noticed me and Wolf which I guess he thought we would be a better meal. I tired to scare him off but it wasn't exactly working. When I tired to hit him with my hooves I missed and hit almost and inch away from him. It startled him for a second but he still wanted to eat us. So I did it again and this time I hit him on his back, pretty hard too. He fell in pain. After a short minute he was able to push himself up and he limped off. "Are you alright?" Pocahontas asked her dad. "I'm fine, but I think my leg is broken." he said. "What happened?" Pocahontas tried to help her dad. "I was trying to find you when out of nowhere this guy popped up in a cloud of smoke. He was blue and his head was on fire. It scared my horse who threw me which and ran away. So the man demanded that I tell him where a white horse with wings was. I had no idea what he was talking about. He got really bad and just disappeared." her father said. Hades. Now he was looking for me. "I think the horse you just mentioned is that one." Pocahontas pointed at me. "Come on. We need to get you home." she said and helped her dad onto my back. We walked back to the burnt village and Pocahontas helped her dad with his leg. I wondered off to the edge of the village and poked around. Some how Hades had gotten here and he had to be the reason for the fire. So somewhere over here had to be away out. I went deeper into the woods where I found another one of those weird pools. Charon said they would take you to other place everytime you went in. So maybe if I jumped in again it would take me somewhere else and possibly closer to Hercules and Meg. I ran back to Pocahontas. "What?" she asked. "I think he has to leave." her father said. She rubbed my nose and said "Thank you for helping me find my father." I licked her and galloped back to the pool. Wolf was staring into it and asked me what it was for. I told him that it would take me to my friends and out of here. He sighed sadly and turned to leave. But I stopped him. He said that I could go hoe and find his friends and that i didn't need him anymore. That he would probably just mess something up. Now I couldn't just leave him here alone. He was a big help. Sure he was jump but I liked him and I didn't want to leave him. So I asked if he wanted to come with and that maybe we could find his home too. I don't think anyone could have said yes fast enough. I said all he had to do was jump in the pool. He looked at the pool. Then at me, then at the pool again. He wasn't going to do it himself so I paused him in and jumped in after. The pool spun us around for a little before throwing us on the ground. We both rolled a short distance through sand. I looked up to see nothing but desert for miles. They definently weren't going to be here.
end of chapter 3
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Post by Scooterly on Jun 7, 2007 21:49:34 GMT -5
AH HEY! You aren't allowed to stop there, that's cruel . . . Post more soon!
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Post by Arabella on Jun 8, 2007 23:58:29 GMT -5
Aww, a cliffhanger. Please post more soon. ^^ I love it!
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