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Post by Arabella on May 20, 2007 10:48:43 GMT -5
YAY! Victory for Meg!
This is a GREAT story! Please continue! ^__^
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Post by NachoChees3<3'sHerc on May 21, 2007 8:09:46 GMT -5
Yea post more! =D
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Post by megatude on May 23, 2007 16:57:26 GMT -5
Continued.....
Outside, the sky was turning a golden-pink as the sun was dropping from view. Realizing how late it was, Meg figured she'd better rap things up and get back to the apartment. She changed and stuffed her uniform into her bag. By the time she got to the parking lot, the moon had taken it's place in the heavens. The street lights flickered. Meg strapped her belongings to her scooter, swung a leg over the padded seat, and prepared to take off. She kicked the starter and the machine roared to life. Meg smiled to herself, she absolutely loved the feeling she got whenever she controlled that vehicle. She flipped on the headlights and was a bit startled when the powerful beam revealed the dark silhouette of an unwelcome sore-looser. Ray approached and placed his hands on the handle bars, preventing Meg from escape. Groaning, Meg cut the engine, annoyed by the delay. "Did you really think that you would walk away victorious?" Meg was certain that she felt a headache coming on. She massaged her temples. "Well, technically, I'm not walking away", she clarified. "Shut up!" He snapped. "I wanna re-match. Think you're up to it?" Meg shrugged. "OK. If you insist." She kicked the starter hard and threw the machine into reverse, backing up several yards. Ray chuckled. "What, am I too much for ya? Are you scared of me now?" Meg revved the engine, gaining momentum. "Nope. Just making room." She pushed off the ground and sped toward him. Ray didn't flinch. He was gonna show Meg true fighting skills. He spread his legs, preparing to throw her off when she got close enough. Meg slammed the brakes, stopping just before him. Her front tire pinched beneath his crotch. Guys could be so thick, he'd left himself wide open. Ray looked down at his position and leaned over the handlebars for support, waiting for the pain to subside. Meg leaned in close, almost nose-to-nose and whispered; "I win!" He fell to his knees in agony. "Sorry o'l boy", she apologized sincerely. "But, you did ask for it." She placed a helmet over her head and gave him a thumbs up. She then took off down the road. Her long, Auburn hair trailing behind. After recovering a bit, Ray staggered to his feet. His middle still a little tender. "I truly envy the poor sap that conquers that wild heart", he mumbled to himself as he watched her drive away.
End of Chapter 3
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Post by Peggy on May 23, 2007 18:09:09 GMT -5
Go Meg!
It's a great story. I can't wait to read more of it.
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Post by megatude on May 23, 2007 18:16:02 GMT -5
Think so?
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Post by Peggy on May 23, 2007 18:17:52 GMT -5
Of course I do! It's really good.
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Post by Arabella on May 24, 2007 23:11:04 GMT -5
AWESOME! ;D POST MORE PLEASE! <333
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Post by megatude on May 26, 2007 19:12:23 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Meg pulled into the underground parking garage of the humble, run-down, apartment complex. Stone Gardens was about three blocks off of campus. Convenient, but also cheap. Which was all that the two college students could afford on a government's fund. To the best of their knowledge, neither had any known 'living' relatives. Out of sheer coincidence, their parents died together during a fatal plane crash. When the girls were about fourteen, their parents booked a trip to Europe for an anniversary get-away, leaving them behind with various babysitters. Risking flight in a thunder storm, the airline was struck out of the sky. Though the bodies could not be recovered, funeral services still proceeded. It was there, in the depth of sorrow and remorse, where the two gals met. Their parent's services, as it was, happened to be held at the same mortuary house. Though their differences were apparent from the start, they found comfort in each other. Unfortunately, being minors and orphans, they were placed in various foster homes. But, luckily, they were able to stay within forty miles of each other, meaning frequent visits. After graduating from High School, they registered at PSU and became inseparable.
Meg whistled a tune as she climbed the stairwell to room 62, two floors up. She plugged her room key into the lock, turned, and was granted access. "I'm home!" She announced and threw her bag on the couch. Zebra emerged from her room, a pen behind her ear. She'd obviously been submerged in her textbooks. "So, how did it go?" Meg went to the fridge and grabbed a water bottle. "Need you ask?" She replied between gulps. "I admit, he gave me some grief, but I came through in the end." Folding her arms, Zebra gave Meg a disappointed glance. "Meg, you're not the only occupant here", she indicated, pointing at her mis-placed bag. "Alright, alright. I'll take care of it." She put her sweaty clothes into the wash as Zebra made dinner. She prepared chicken Enchiladas. "How went studying in the library?" Meg asked, taking a bite. "OK, I guess. I really didn't find anything that was beneficial." After clearing the dishes and getting their turn in the shower, they set for bed. They each had a room to themselves, with their own twin bed. After saying goodnight they retreated to their rooms at doused the lights.
End of chapter 4
(I know that was a dumb chapter, but I wanted them to be each other's family. All they had>)
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Post by Arabella on May 28, 2007 9:43:06 GMT -5
No, I don't think it was dumb at all.  I like getting background info on the lives of the characters. ^^ Can't wait for more! |
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Post by megatude on May 28, 2007 17:00:27 GMT -5
Chapter 5
Wednesdays were usually pretty laid back. Neither had any scheduled classes. This time during the week was reserved for; grocery shopping and housework. A supermarket was conveniently located across the street. What better place to re-stock empty cupboards? Meg hated grocery shopping with a passion. She'd tried every excuse to wiggle out of it. But the guilt of having Zebra carry all those bags to the apartment by herself, always got her in the end. Stalking up and down the ailes, Meg continued to sulk. But, Zebra assured that this was just a short trip. When finished, they headed toward the front of the store to check out. Meg spotted Darren, scanning items for the customer ahead of them. How convenient that he would a part-time job here, and have a shift at this particular time of day. Meg nearly bolted, but Zebra pulled her back. "This is the shortest line", she stressed. "We can endure two minutes of his presence, can't we?" When she said 'we', she meant Meg not kicking his butt, more than anything. Meg took this as a challenge. With her head held high, she helped place their items on the conveyor belt. Acknowledging their presence, Darren grinned wickedly. "How are you today", he said more out of habit than being personal. "Fine. Thanks", Zebra replied. "You missed a killer party the other night." Meg avoided his gaze. "Funny. I thought you were gonna skip it", Meg pointed out his contradiction. He frowned. "$28.32", he announced their total. Zebra handed him the correct amount. He gave them their receipt and proceeded to ring-out the next customer, without the traditional; 'Have a good day!' Obviously, he was still pretty sore about Meg turning him down, on both counts. Meg spotted a suggestion box that read; 'Questions? Comments? Please let us know how we can make your shopping experience more pleasant'. Meg believed she had a few to contribute. 'How about a pay-cut for your star employee? Or, better yet, termination?' She grinned at the possibilities, the customer was always right, after all. Zebra noticed her scheming grin. "What're you thinking?" "Nothing", she assured, leading the way out through the automatic doors. "Nothing at all."
To be continued.....
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Post by NPTFlea on May 30, 2007 21:54:48 GMT -5
I LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!!! I will get it on the site with the next update, which should be June 1st, if all works as planned.
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Post by Scooterly on May 30, 2007 22:24:32 GMT -5
Hey finally got a chance to get all caught up in this; its AWESOME! I love the idea, it's very orginal and very creative! But now . . . I'm at the end . . . I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work! ;D I'm loving this!
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Post by megatude on May 30, 2007 23:46:28 GMT -5
Continued....
When the days chores were complete, both were too tired to fix supper. "Let's eat out tonight", suggested Zebra. They boarded Meg's scooter and headed for, Domingo's Pizza Parlor. They ordered a medium, pepperoni pizza for the both of them to share. "This is a welcome change." Zebra nodded. "This was definitely needed." Meg began a conversation about a letter they had received earlier, concerning their student loans. "So, now the bank's gonna raise our interest rate to 10%." Zebra was, of course, shocked and upset. "You're joshing me." She immediately realized her mistake and covered her mouth with her hands, but it was too late. Meg's face was flush with hurt and embarrassment. Zebra removed her hands and sighed. "Ya know Meg, you really need to get over him and move on. I mean, he was scum and it was over a year ago." Meg slammed her fists on the table. "I AM over him! Just because I basically despise the entire male population, and have turned down every opportunity to date since, doesn't mean I'm not." She picked up the check for the pizza. An obvious sign that the conversation was closed and it was time to go.
Not much was said during the drive home. Partially because it was a bit difficult to carry on a conversation over the roar of the engine, but only a small part. Meg was still fuming. This was apparent by the way she handled the rough road and caught some air on the bumps. All Zebra could do was grip tightly to Meg's shoulders. Thankfully, the trip was only a ten minute drive. And the way Meg was driving, they made it in six. After unlocking the door, Meg opened it with a shove. With that force, it bounced off the wall. Zebra caught the doorknob to steady it. She watched Meg, in a volley of steam, march into the bathroom and slam the door. Zebra flinched slightly at the sound. The sound of running water took over the uncomfortable silence. Meg's solution to a dose of temper was a cold shower. Zebra plopped herself onto the sofa. Of course, she'd be the first to apologize. It got the arguments over quicker.
Meg braced herself against the shower wall, taking slow, easy breaths, letting the cool water run off her body. Why did Zebra have to bring up such things? She knew how much it upset her. She was there when the disaster struck. But, she could hardly blame her. She hadn't yet experienced a true relationship. Then again, neither had Meg. It really wasn't worth the argument.
Meg rapped a towel around her wet head and stepped into the living room. She found Zebra lounging on the couch, watching, of all things, the nine o'clock news. Seeing Meg approach, she punched the off button. After a few minutes of unnerving silence, they both blurted; "I'm sorry". They chucked. "I really am sorry Meg. It's not my place to butt into your relationships." Meg shook her head. "No, I'm the one who should be sorry. But, I would deeply appreciate it if you would let me handle this in my own way. I'm better off without a man anyway." Zebra nodded. "I may not agree with how you're coping with this, but I'm not going to push you." They embraced with no hard feelings.
End of chapter 5
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Post by Peggy on May 31, 2007 0:02:18 GMT -5
Awesome chapter! This is a really great story. I can't wait to read more!
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Post by Arabella on Jun 3, 2007 2:08:15 GMT -5
I love this story! I can't wait to read more!
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I like getting background info on the lives of the characters. ^^ Can't wait for more! 
